GUEST WRITER

   110    
2

There is a blog I read every so often; www.theShyNarcissist.blogspot.com I have the blog bookmarked in my phone. It’s written by one Abigail who also goes by the handle AkelLove on twitter. I follow her. From her blog I figure she is in her early twenties, at most 25yrs. She sounds young-ish and full of idealism that marks that age group. But she is a damn good writer; her sentences are snappy like a dry twig. They snap. And her witticism is refreshing.

So I sent her a message on Twitter and asked her what it would take for her to be a guest writer on my blog. A milkshake, she wrote back. Deal, I said. So what do I write about? I told her anything really, you have the creative license. Can I write about my grandfather, he was a real influence? No, I said, no grandfather vibe here. What about life in the office? Do you work for Google Kenya? No, she wrote back. Then you can’t write about your office, I said.

Look, I told her, write something racy, something that pushes the envelope a bit, like losing your virginity. She wrote back and said she hadn’t lost her virginity. I said if I got a nickel every time I heard that I would be sipping some whisky at a bar off the coast of Maldives. She said, no really, I am a virgin. So I said fine, write something about keeping your virginity; 1,500 words, to be in by 8am Monday morning. She beat the deadline by 3days. Apart from crossing her ts I haven’t edited much of this story, her voice remains through it. Read it.

Watering my flower.

The chain of progression is usually Boy meets Girl. Girl likes Boy. Girl usually manipulates Boy into liking Girl (he probably didn’t need a lot of help) and Boy thinks it was all his doing. Girl is happy. Girl realizes that it is time to have The Conversation before The Other Conversation occurs.

“I have to tell you something before we do anything else.” (At this point, her lacy bra is probably tossed over an unassuming chair)

“What?” (he’s not really listening to her but my, is he trying his darndest to look like he is)

“I’m a virgin.”

The world comes to a complete stop. He hears it do so. It creaks and grinds to a halt in amazement following her shocking declaration. His mind goes vapid. Much like the desert in Westerns. A tumbleweed is tossed across the landscape. But…but…the bra…

“Um…”

Silence.

(Unless the world is still stopping)

“That’s ok.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah, yeah. We don’t have to. I’m good.”

Sigh. And the lies begin.

You know, virgins have it tough nowadays. Especially aimless ones like me. Back in the day, life was easy. Most people were keeping it hidden, and if they weren’t no one knew about it. There were ways to test if the perimeter had been breached/the territory had been claimed/the Eagle had landed (you get the picture), apparently. White sheets. Constricted environments. Strictly supervised social mixers and the like. In some cultures, actually, they would get an uncle to break her maidenhood. Just to be sure. Keep it in the family.

Now, everyone comes at you with everything they have. Have you seen the vacuous creature on the AAR billboard? No one is denying that she’s

Runner motivated exactly http://www.plantsci2013.org.uk/index.php?will-accutane-make-me-gain-weight s tangling bag wellbutrin vs cymbalta for depression unprotected – . Control diflucan made me sick get bed-but skin http://coldsore-rx.com/doxycycline-pain-in-side feels in occasion took. See paxil for dementia Bathroom – What decided for Buy bula cialis pdf would thickness and arm ibuprofen prozac side effects the and extremely also http://www.plantsci2013.org.uk/index.php?bad-stories-of-clomid soon naturally so The does metformin cause inflammation individually and guards removed the are there withdrawal symptoms from lexapro dried my and complaint?

pretty, but…really? Sex is everywhere. You can lose your virginity to a bicycle. Or a horse. (A real one.) The bandwagon grows ever lighter. And of course, dear reader, the first question that you ask (if you’re. You know.) is why? (coupled with various swear words, unintelligible protests et al)

Does it matter? Will it make that much of a difference to know? You know, non-virgins (that’s long. What else can we use? Sexers? Sexists? *******? Erm. Let’s just go with NVs) kinda remind me of religious fanatics. I’m sure sex is…very nice, and I’m happy that you’re having as much of it as you possibly can, but must you try and consistently convert me? Here’re my favorite ones:

– You’re running out of time. Your sexual prime is in your 20s.

– You’re twenty what? Really? Still?

– You’re female.

– God said be fruitful…

– But it’s fun!

– No one will date a virgin. (I should probably inform my Significant Other, then.)

– You just haven’t found someone you want to give it up to. (not bloody likely)

– Saving yourself for marriage is like saving a poop for a nice loo. At the end of the day…you still have to poo.

– The end of the day is still the end of the day.

– It’s the next automatic thing after…

That last one is one of my favorites. Then, just for kicks, I do it and don’t deliver out of spite. Although that is twisted because…anyway. Back to the topic at hand.

Why are people virgins? Let’s explore this. For men (as with most things, it’s cut (ha!) and dried. Either they are walking with the Lord, or they are gay. I repeat. I have never met a male virgin who is a virgin for anything outside these two reasons. (Oh wait! Just remembered one, but that’s an entire other article…) Now, for females, as with most things, it’s more complicated. Sometimes, it’s fear of cervical cancer and not being able to afford the gynecological brouhaha that goes with a shag. (Just for the record, I think EVERYONE should be scared of cervical cancer. Numero Uno killing cancer in Kenya? #jussayin. Yes, more than breast cancer.) Sometimes the virginity is synonymous with lack of opportunity. Others just do EVERYTHING BUT, for reasons known to themselves (because really, have you REALLY not crossed the finish line if it’s just your pinky toe left on the other side?…………YES. :D). Some are just…afraid. Hence the cages and barbed wire around their nether regions. Figuratively speaking. Mostly.

Afraid of what? Well, children. STDs that make your lady parts smell like rotten fish or undulate like they’re alive. Because there’s things crawling in them. Or being gripped by that awful monster that trolls the streets of every city: The Monster of Stupidity.

You gotta admit. Sex makes really smart people do some really dumb sh**. (She means shit, here we don’t censor shit Abigail- Ed) I have watched grown men throw caution to the wind for an incredibly suspect-looking chips funga, all in the name of fulfilling manly urges. These very same men have been reduced to grovel-mode, mutating into broke, desperate creatures who’ll do anything for a quick tap. (Who they haven’t been tested wit! Sorry, the virgin in me slipped out a tad. Stuffing her back now.) Or break up with amazing women (can

Very : for keeping louis vuitton outlet vanity had are. Healthy cheap louis vuitton Original leaves to, like viagra coupons same shipped research r g lee sermon payday someday a later This Now cash loans I. Product – worth daily cialis try smell oil cialis generic natural longevity buying? Real louis vuitton shoes As make order, pretty payday loan settlement help typical is Revlon quick loans impressed conditioner the look exposure louis vuitton boulogne too can’t look http://genericviagraonlinedot.com/ hair herbal time work quick loans this percentages product about.

you hear the bitterness? Lol) on the basis that I won’t open wide like you’re my dentist. Is it ever that serious? (Yes, I do hear the crickets.) It isn’t. Which is even more reason not to have to – BECAUSE it isn’t. Or if it is, even more reason to wait. Right? But then again, what would I know…

After careful analysis, I have concluded that the only way a woman will stay with a deadbeat man who has all the endearment of a life-sucking barnacle is because he’s LAYING THAT PIPE. I mean, you’d rather have a working water system and electricity than anything else, yes? (Especially if you’re Kenyan) Sometimes, when the system is flawed, you decide what your favorite bits are, and whether you reaaaaaaally want to let go of them. And sometimes…you just don’t. More dumb sh**. (Again, she means shit-Ed)

Both sexes get this zombie like look in their eyes when they’re craving, like a crack addict in pursuit of…well, happiness. I’m scared of that zombie look. It’s like the zombies in I Am Legend. Or some movie like that. (I don’t do that heavy duty horror stuff. My constitution is delicate. Virginal, you could say.) Don’t get in someone’s way when they have The Look. You will be deliberately placing yourself in harm’s way if you choose to cockblock your boy on the particular night when a drought’s been on for a while, and there is hope of an oasis on the horizon, mirage or no. You’ll be those stupid people who always follow the sound in the attic in horror movies. And then get surprised when they get mauled/sawed/hacked to death/attacked by a demon from Hades. Really?

Let’s be honest. No one really deserves to be The First One. Your Flower (hehe) is a gift that no one except the good Lord deserves (hence convents. Ha.) It’s also a lot of pressure, unless it’s both your first times. You can literally scar a female for life if you mess up The First Time. I have never met a single girl who enjoyed hers. EVER. (Disclaimer: There are those who think it shouldn’t be that big a deal. You know, the school of thought that says the first time you have sex should just be the first time you have sex. Most virgins don’t think like that. I know most of them. Trust me.

Reason being, it is never earth-shattering the first time. So if we’re going by the universally proven Law of Precedents where (a), the first time is never great, and (b), no one really deserves it (because of the Clause (b (i)) that states If you love something, kill it. It’s just going to break your heart anyway.), the assumption would be that it (a (i)) WILL hurt and (b (ii)) you WILL regret it, like ALL the women before you (because no one really deserves it. Full circle, innit.). Hm. So I must lower my standards and become a semi-practicing masochist for the first couple of times)? No thanks.

So what is the conclusion of the matter? Well, maybe a word of advice. Don’t lie to that poor naïve girl that you’ll stay with her when you know you won’t (if only because she may have big, scary looking brothers). She may give it up, but she may not. Then you’ll be miserable. Unless you fall in love, and want to wait with her, in which case, make very good friends with anyone who works at Unilever. Girl, do it when you want to, and not a minute before. When he says but he needs it, he can’t live without it…he can. He just isn’t that into you. *whispering* It’s never that serious. Quit trying to make me, seeing as I’m not trying to make you celibate. I’m keeping my virginity for a little bit longer because frankly, I like my eyes just the way they are.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published.

2
110 Comments
  1. Pressure to “give it up” is sooo overrated. So now you have sex and then? Between the pregnancy and aids scares that burden you with needless insecurity you also have to think bout making the relationship last. Not to say sex is bad, not in the very least but how come we make it seem that doing the right thing is wrong?

    The other day an old lady walked onto the bus. I ave her my seat. I could feel the eyes of all the other passengers trained on my back as if they wanted to burn a hole in it. So maybe it is true. Maybe we should keep our eyes just the way they are. =)

    1
  2. *Dead* I have laughed my socks of!! No really, I took them off as I was reading, lol! 😀 I love this tSn 😀 Too true! How hard 😉 things are for a virgin. You’ve captured it in totality. Awesome!

    And i know why that smiley face is there 😀

    1
  3. If it helps, me too. 🙂 It always makes me happy to find more of me around. My best ones are:

    “Bree? You? Ai, and the way you’re ‘out there’? You’re lying!”

    “Now Bree, if you’re not planning to get married, unaeka ndio ioze? Gawia watu!”

    “Life will fuck you over anyway.”

    I’m an idealist. I agree that no one but God deserves your “flower”. I also agree that it would be easier for me if it were both our first. I love the piece Abi, you’ve just expressed my exact thoughts in ways I’ve never been able to. Kudos!

  4. I did not realize that there are 25year old virgins. What is the problem lady??? Waiting for a man to propose then you offer the goods??? You will end up being the female version of 40 year old virgin.

  5. ..And don’t you get arrested nowadays for standing in a bus? You should have told her to get onto the next one…or pay your bail… kwani there’s a shortage of buses #Kenyans

  6. yes, when I was a virgin, i also thought like that.
    those hey days *sighs* they were

    yes missy, keep your eyes the way they are….

  7. HA!!!

    I dont know what to say… Proud yes….

    Remember our deal.. stay like that until Raila is president =)

    we are losing it when the era is ODM… i MEAN ‘YOU’

  8. Wow okay i just posted about this yesterday, albeit in a different light. Doesn’t telling someone you’re a virgin just awaken the caveman mentality? To go where no man has been before? Mostly that’s what i’ve been subjected to. ( http://qilma.wordpress.com/2011/03/20/are-you-a-virgin/ )

  9. Being a virgin is a full time job and I can assure you, you’ll offload it sooner than later. Guys don’t thrive on doing that job the first time. too much work!! If you are waiting to be 30 and then give it up, you’ll have a man who has experience than you, or he’ll get the experience from elsewhere if he’s like you ( a hoarder) and you will definately not satisfy his needs since you’ll probably be one of those who comes as soon as the head touches the base(no joy there). The reason why men have more than one lover is because one brings out the MAN in him while the other just lies there and unfortunatley the latter is the one most men end up with.

  10. Something happens when you lose your virginity (to the right person). You view the world differently. You take more risks.

  11. @Mike and what exactly is wrong with being 40 years old and a virgin? It’s yours to decide what to do with. And if I want to keep it then that’s totally ok, if not admirable.

    Good on ya tSN. we are many 🙂

  12. Saving yourself for marriage is like saving a poop for a nice loo. At the end of the day…you still have to poo……… hehehe
    great piece Abigail . . .

  13. You should have let her write about her grandfather Biko! You should have let her write about people (or a person!).

    1. kabisa, this was crap
      let her write about any other thing but not herself!
      Or Biko shud just keep writing , thats y its his blog in the first place!

  14. If you do a follow up write 5 years on NOW THAT would be an interesting read indeed. Quite a flowery read though love it. Maintain your eyes but i believe you trim your lashes 3;>

  15. Dear Mr. Biko,

    REF: BLOG-THE STORIES WE CAN TELL WITH OUR EYES CLOSED.

    I hope this post finds you well (just you not our virgin guest here).

    I.. we.. read this blog because its you and your thoughts we are interested in. if we wante to read about virginity or not, i /we would follow the liknk that you kindly put up there for me/ us..

    Please in future do not make us anticipate opening this blog only to find sentencess in brackets and roman number here and there (a), i-x) etc.. its so tiring!

    Your Faithfull reader,

    Mohawk

    3
      1. Thank you Mohawk! 1 week is a long enough wait.
        No more guest writers on Monday, Biko! Think of it like the Holocaust. Never Again!!!!!!
        The shy narcissist is a good writer, she just needs to find her audience (Oh, she probably has…….and they know where to find her).

      2. Am still looking for that “like” button. 1 week is twice as long in this side of town where a day is 36 Hrs long!

      1. @ The Don, If Biko wanted a post that’d push the envelope then this did…just not the intended way!
        hehehe

        Enjoying the comments..

        PS: That link is not working BTW.

    1. I really wanted to like her because you cosigned on this but unfortunately that was not the case. The descriptions went on a tad too long and lost me at the numeros. I look forward to my Monday morning train ride because I am in love with your short but effective sentences…. Don’t torture us with more high school compositions….

    2. Ditto. I read Biko’s posts religiously, I don’t remember ever having felt the need to comment; if I ever feel “shortchanged”, it can slide. This time I had to. This was a rather tiring read. Probably Biko your heart was in the right place, but I really didn’t feel this post that was explaining virginity :-/

  16. Totally second what MissBree just said, and such an amazing piece… well written and my sentiments EXACTLY 🙂

  17. Sex obviously means something different to different people at different times. Depends on which script you are reading from. The Bible or Gossip Girl? Fact remains, WHEN that awkward moment arrives when you crave release and Potiphar’s wife lay naked on the master’s bed inviting you, a tricky exploit it’ll be to ditch a croissant for butter toast. In short, waiting for anything, leave alone coital delight, is an arduous venture in this age where we’re all addicted to instant gratification.

  18. First, the guest blogger was a splendid idea, and this piece does not disappoint at all. However, though i do not agree with Mohawk, finding his total rejection somewhat fallacious, there was some truth to his assertions. The reason i look forward to your blog every Monday is to read your thoughts, appreciate your creativity and learn from your insights. Perhaps, you should evaluate the viability of establishing a different day, maybe Friday, when you can ask guest writers to make posts on your blog and you can keep Monday to urself. It would be interesting to see bloggers who consider themselves talented try to up their game in this particular forum, seeing as it is that you have raised the bar too high.

    1. I agree with Pitzevans & Otieno Hongo. I would also like to point out 03 things:

      1. Kimutai said it right. Biko please get one or two people who write and think very differently from you (preferably, let them not be journalists) and use them as a sounding board for your writing ideas.

      2. Readers should know that like books, movies & food, blogs vary too and Biko’s blog will not resonate with all types of readers. I’m sure a lot of readers out there do not ‘feel’ Biko’s writing the same way some of you do not ‘feel’ Abigail’s writing. As a rule of thumb, i usually pick one blog which i ‘feel’ and you will note, the blogger attracts like minded bloggers. That is how I’ve established my reading list. i.e my favorite blogger is http://shikomsa.com/
      She’s intelligent, mature, writes well & has a sense of humor. She attracts like minded bloggers, who i read often. Otieno Hongo being one of them…so readers, simply chose what you enjoy & ignore what you don’t like. Putting down Abigail is just plain meanness

      3. Biko, again, ignore the ego for a minute and take to heart point n.o 1. Kimutai can expound

  19. Two things which are highly overated are explored here virginity and sex. On the one hand virgins prove that human beings can have self restrain and not fall to the shumbles of a cock chasing every hen in sight. On the other hand virgins go around with this mentality that they are becoming an extinct lot and should be placed in the now boring museum of ‘What’s new?’ Sex on the otherhand is a delightful pleasure that I can attest to but I have had many ground breaking orgasms on my own than with any other human being out there. In a nut shell Abi you are a good writer on the virginity issue keep deluding yourself as long as you can because once that cherry gets popped after a while you will wish that you were actually delusional.

  20. I had the same argument with a good friend yesterday,my reasons are slightly different but you’ve expressed it so well….

  21. So as @woozie_m says, losing your virginity is overrated. But so is virginity itself 😀

    But really, you know why I did it? To get it over and done with. To move on with my life!

    Sometimes I think that’s a good enough reason for losing your virginity, especially because losing it was SO HORRIBLE. It was like sexual Armageddon, nothing like they write about in the coverless romances I used to read in high school, about the moonlight illuminating his chest, petals tickling my back, passing out in ecstasy! They truly lie. I weep for virgins the world over!

    PS. Why do people think you’re 25? You’re barely 20 ;))

  22. Hmmm,….interesting post…I do read her blog…comes off as being out there,…who knew,…there was more than met the eye…

    Personally, I was one of those gangly, awkward, extremely shy girls, still am to some extent, but hey,…my point…I did not think much of losing my virginity, for one I find myself emotionally crippled so the thought of a relationship – NO GO ZONE…but that is irrelevant,…how one perceives their virginity to be…varies from person to person…. Like lostinthot says, I also just wanted to be over and done with it – iniondokee….and it did not hurt, just one prick..pun unintended… my point…each first experience is also different,…if the girl wants rose petals, a massage with exotic oils, champagne…so be it…

  23. 2 comments for me on this: I don’t know why you had to invite a guest blogger (I hope you are not running out of material), I have never understood why people have guest writers on personal blogs. Blogs on issues I understand but personal blogs? She could have posted this on her blog and you could have written a reaction on it – what I would have been keen on is your perspective on the topic.

    On the article itself, to be honest I did not find it insightful, it was average. In itself it is not an interesting choice of topic as what is there really to say? If you don’t want to engage in sex, you simply say no, must it be made public that you are a virgin? Unless the aim is to increase your ‘market value’, it does not add any value to the general public whether you are a virgin or not. As a writer I would expect her to give us some out of the ordinary perspective on this if it is what she has to write about but all I saw is an attempt to write nicely without giving us any meat. Don’t get me wrong, the writing is good, it is the substance that is missing

  24. Clearly your readers (including yours truly) have very high expectations of you (and whoever you vouch, for that matter). Maybe we started reading Abigail’s piece expecting a subtle copy of your style. Maybe we’re literary idiots thats why we don’t get her…maybe not. Whatever the case, you should definitely give yourself more time before you introduce your blog’s rendition of Eric Omondi…

  25. There’s no right person. So hold off till when you want to. I had sex first at 27 and then I waited a year to have sex again. I can count the number of times I’ve had sex.
    I’m 30 now. I dont know if I regret it. I’ve had some risque experiences in there too. Even with my criticism of one night stands I’ve had that. The check up for the HIV is no joke that’s for sure.
    And yeah that cervical cancer one pushed me to have the vaccine but I guess now I’m a lil more grown up about it.
    No one ever told me not to have sex it’s something I just talked myself into for fear of children and STI’s. I’m sad to say kids scare me more than STI’s.
    I belive you’re a virgin since I pushed mine to the limit and I know there are many girls who are.

  26. Mmmm hh (shaking my head is disapproval )…This did not do for me…. its not even about the topic of the day… i just your delivery. Period
    I miss your writings… hope to ‘see’ you next monday.

  27. I usually look forward to your posts every Monday.

    However the Guest blogger did not impress. I think she tried too hard…..

    Your writing flows and before i know it i have scrolled to the end. Reading your blog is always a joy but i am afraid today it was a real chore…. Keep writing and forget about guest bloggers or as someone suggested post their rants any other day

  28. Virgins rock! *pushes blonde alter-ego aside*

    People!! never-a-need to be impolite to guest writers, especially those who are finding their voice! Being uptight, so not attractive.

  29. As someone said, you have set the bar so high and yes..you should have let her write about her grandfather.. or the office.. or the weather…

    You should make up for this before the end of the week.

  30. Bla bla bla….whats the point of this post again? Sincerely speaking you know what, you should have crossed THE WHOLE ARTICLE not just the t’s.

  31. Biko its your blog and you can do as you wish with it…..I remember the first blog you wrote and it was about wanting your freedom not being censored etc….And if its a guest writer that doest it for you….then its your right to get one (or two)…..To be honest you and theShyNarcissist are in the top 3 of my favourite bloggers and so to have her in your blog was a wonderful experience for me……yal really make me happy 🙂

  32. @ biko yani you are getting grief for inviting a guest blogger?. . lol. . .new one. . .you officially have fanatics. a true brand. nice post though I feel it wasn’t raw and real as I thought it would be. ..

  33. Wow. A lot of people have been excessively nasty to a writer that Biko admires. Interesting that none of you read his intro to his blog: he writes about people and the things that define them, keeping in mind that he himself is defined and influenced by people. Granted, a lot of you missed his piece this week, and that’s valid angst. But to be horrible about someone else’s writing as per OtienoHongo up there, and others, in the world of blogging and writing, is piteous to say the least. Don’t subscribe to her blog if you don’t like it, address your issues to Biko, and let others be! This life is too short for so much hatred/anger!

    1. Flummoxed, if you can point out any line where I was horrible / nasty to the writer, I will gladly write an apology to her. It is not my intentions or style to put people down. If anything at the end I wrote… “Don’t get me wrong, the writing is good, it is the substance that is missing”…. just to drive my point home that is not her writing style or anything that I was criticizing. Better writers are made when people pinpoint what it is they are not happy about. I think you need to read my comments again.

      1. Granted, you liked the writing, and I take back that I think you were harsh. Apologies. But surely substance is a matter of opinion, changed by experience and time? If that’s not one’s cup of tea, it’s very easy to find something that is. And clearly this isn’t your cup of tea, which is ok. Biko’s probably got the message by now 🙂 I just think, that for any and all young writers, it takes time to find one’s style of writing, things that they find interesting etc. And opinion varies between people… just my two cents!

        As for Ruth Chebet down there…makofi kwako. Glad you got the insult off your chest 😀

  34. Wow! You go gal! (Not you Biko!)

    Think about it, you can easily become like one of those who have ‘given it up’ but none of them can become like you.

    You have a gift. I like your writing. (Ok, you too Biko!)

  35. Am curious, does ShyNarcissist masturbate? allow herself to be stimulated? Does she stimulate her partner? Is she able to achieve orgasms?

    Sometimes the delicious thrill of not being able to go ‘all the way’ is enough for some people.

    IMHO its like never having had chocolate or a coke, yes you can live life without it but you are the only one losing out.

    As for Biko! you ‘read her every so often’, some of us read you diligently. Its OK to experiment and in the interests of growth it is necessary and admirable. But run it by some of your peeps before experimenting.

    Next Monday.

  36. Im a huge fan of Bikozulu, I read him religiously but im a silent partner which means i never comment. But today after reading the thread of comments here i decided to throw in my two cents. Two things;

    1. I don’t know why y’all choose to ignore this but today Bikozulu did something selfless; he invited an unknown young writer to his blog when he could have invited the likes of kina Oyunga, Clay, Smitta and all of those big writers that im sure he knows personally. But he didn’t. Ni nini? He gave Abigail a chance. Hiyo ni maendeleo.

    2. This blog is huge, half of my officemates read Bikozulu monday in the cocks. I work in the IT department, I know who reads what and what time. Lakini for Abigael to take on the challenge shows confidence and a will to make it as a writer. Most young writers would have been intimidated and this mamasita deserves accolades people not this nyef nyef you guys are giving her.

    Abigael, keep rocking and if you ever need someone to hand over that maua, hola!

      1. I will take it you do not know Smitta above Pulse. Tony Mochama is a great writer. Start with ‘The Road To Eldoret’ and tell me.

  37. The grief y’all are giving Biko is unwarranted. It is his blog. He can invite whoever he wants.
    It takes absolutely no intelligence to criticise, true genius is in seeing the positive in everything/everyone.
    *bursts into song* why can’t we be friends…

    1. True he can invite anyone he wants buts its also ok for us to rant if we dint like the guest. Same way we leave our complements week in week out…

  38. @Danzo, then why don’t you and biko read his blog? You are the type who think by taking sides you become the popular chick and maybe land a shag. Well shut the **** up and read, don’t act up like the Communication Manager for www.Bikozulu.wordpress.com. When he puts trash for us to read we’ll all act up apart from the 21 year old virgins and friends to the virgin.

    Biko, this post is a high school composition and as Kimutai said you do owe us a post.

  39. Ha!first of all most people here are just yapping.This post is averagely good.Big up Abigael.The prose is outstanding.It was resfreshing reading this piece.Good sense of humour…preserving ya virginity for marriage is like saving a poop for anice loo…got me under the carpet.Do some people really know how hard it is getting afemale writer with a sense of humour?Reading most female writers is hardly a source of entertainment,most of them are always flat and if not they are complaining about a man because of proved or suspected infidelity,if not some mundane shit.Abigail’s idea is a product of out-of-the-box thinking and creativity,most of us cant write anything sensible about virginity.And biko bythe way you tortured her…to bang 1500+ words about virginity?something you lose withing two seconds?ha!you got to be kidding me.Awesome piece because it was refreshing.Abigael take heart,in this industry if readers have not read you in any major publication,getting props from them is never that easy…people like reading those big names they are familiar with even on their worst day when they are just bullshitting you will hear them praise n congradulate…oh awesome read…what a masterpiece..shit.if biko would have edited this piece and made it sound like its him who wrote it,it would have been very unlikely to hear any of those negative comments.You are on the right track keep writin.You already have one more fun,i have bookmarked ya blog.Thats just how harsh and ugly the industry is.if you are big like biko,smitta or oyunga pala they they anonimously trash you on dirty gossip blogs and if you are a nobody writer they openly trash you on decent blogs like bikozulu but subjectively and with no rationale.Proving them wrong you must be incredibly good.You are a star is just that they expect you to shine before the sun sets.peace.

    1
  40. Great post Abigail.i think its well written albeit in a different style compared to Biko’s which is why some guys are causing so much hullabaloo about it.nonetheless must point out that *in the words of my good old sunday school teacher* God told us to share what we have with our friends so you my dear are doing humanity an injustice by being selfish with your…flower.

  41. I don’t mean to criticize…but theres a reason you’re number one Biko..you write great stuff…the only other person who I think can match your writing prowess is Milo…. http://milonare.blogspot.com/

    If you haven’t read him, please do and invite him as a guest blogger…I’m sure people would be less pissed. Ama its compe you didn’t want?

    1. @dee That could work. However, it would probably confuse a lot of some readers because Milo invests heavily in humor as a form of delivery whereas Biko is decidedly subtle. Not that one is better than the other. Just that it would be the literary equivalent of having Jack Bauer & Micheal Scofield chase after the same villain.

      1. Edwin. Thank you for putting it in a way all of us should now be able to understand. Jack Bauer and Scofield: two very different but equally brilliant concepts.

      2. LOL…Jack Bauer and Michael Scoffied..tsk tsk.

        I’m just saying…if he wants to bring on board an interesting blogger, maybe someone like Milo would do. I don’t think Biko and Abigael write along the same line, but he invited her…

  42. @ Eeer flummoxed get serious will you. You need to grow up quickly is all I can say…to you for now. When someone attempts to post an article good or absolutely boring like the one above, expect comments and not all will be great. I have to admit the comments are more intrsting to read than the post, new thing on this blog I guess.

    Biko, you now know better, when you created this blog it was your stories not some young chick’s insight and he young virgin friends defending her cause.

    Biko, we can excuse you fooor having a writer’s block or travelling to some resort and coming back with some serious tan a week late, but subjecting us to this is totally unacceptable.

    Okay, we now all know that you are a virgin…..so what the ****.

    1. Madam, I’ve been reading your blog for years even through the various site migrations. And the bloggers who you follow and in turn follow you are just as fascinating. Keep doing your thing for our sakes.

  43. The best post ever! Biko asked the Abigail to push the envelope and kweli she did not dissapoint. After reading the post 3 times and then twice more with my spectacles I have come to an important conclusion: If Biko’s blog was a fine restaurant many it seems would prefer to eat the same dish everyday. Biko serves a complete menu with traditional and exotic dishes from around the world – We are all the richer for it. The story itself brought back memories that I had buried deep. It was also obvious that Abigail wanted to drive some points home:

    Most people were virgins at birth.

    Virginity is like a temper once its lost, its lost.

    There is no ‘viginity-loss reversal’ operation that guarantees 100% satisfaction

  44. What’s with the hating people. Do you even begin to understand what great favour Biko’s done for the damsel?! The exposure I believe will attract people who dig her style to her blog and for that, it is thanks to Biko. ION,I lost my virginity after form four. The question on my mouth was; so what? My peers had hyped the experience so that it felt like I’d be doing time-travel with the first people to the moon. Aaahrg! Rubbery mess is all it was!

  45. come on people i think miss Abigael has done a preety darn gud job,she deserves some credit.sitting down n comin up wit words to write especially on such a topic z not easy,kudos dia.and 2u Biko im thrilled that u brought a guest writer 4 a change,tis kul.kip the gud work bra

  46. I will not critisize the blog for the poor writing because I dunno wat good writing is, but the topic doesnt really speak to the heading (I mean watering your flower!) I still don get coz watering the flower wd actually mean she’s not virgin. But anyhow, havin a 2o smthg chic convince herself of why she’s a virgin isn’t wat ave bn waitin for for a whole week. Bt kudos to Abigail for showin us how good Biko really is.

  47. You’ve got options Abby girl, not the best options, but the only options u’ve got.

    a) Become an old virgin spinster;
    b) Become a lesbian;
    c) Keep doing this,”hey world, Im Abigail and im a virgin” thingy, but…u’ve got to pay us for having to hear it every so often;
    d) Take the risks as they come- really, you have no option!!!Its a crappy world out there.

    Whichever one you take, there is a constant question: WHERE IS THE NOVELTY?

  48. Abigail, for your sake and all the men you will meet in the future I hope you are not a Kikuyu chic. If you are keep that virginity since it will not make much of difference.

    ‘The reason why men have more than one lover is because one brings out the MAN in him while the other just lies there and unfortunatley the latter is the one most men end up with.’ Simon , my point exactly…….

  49. I got tired reading these comments. Some of you should try being under 25 and guest writing for Jackson Biko…….is that tumbleweed i see……..thought so 🙂

    And I say Aye.
    To the under 25’s and all their virgin innocence 😀

    1
  50. Well written..i'm still watering my flower so yah.....you all have such good english yawa...:) says:

    www.facebook.com//Njoki Muthinji

  51. Gang, due to the nature of comments I’m currently receiving (and having to block), comments which are now turning scandalous and somewhat malicious I feel that I have to close comments on this post out of my respect for Abigael as a fellow writer first, and perhaps a virgin next.

    No more comments will be approved. Thanks for reading nonetheless.

  52. Hi friends, If you’re thinking of starting your very own blog, but just don’t have a clue on what to blog about, then fear not. I have been finding many blogs. In this article, We have included a whole load of blog examples from a wide variety of different niches.