Starting Over

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I have cousin called Farouk. Not his real name. Farouk is a jailbird. I won’t get into why and how he ended up in the can again because I wrote about it here in one of my earlier post. Farouk turned 30 in Feb. He didn’t blow candles. He didn’t get smashed. Nobody toasted to his good health. He didn’t get laid…I hope not, damn it! He celebrated it as he had celebrated the last three birthdays, in his drab jail clothes, toiling in the laundry section of the slammer by day and sleeping on an ultra thin mattress by night in a dark cell that he called home for the three years (including the time he spent in remand). He celebrated it by dreaming about freedom.

The first year after judge threw the book at him I often found some sort of morbid pleasure in using his incarceration as a prop for humor. When I was out with friends I would make sure I mention I have a cousin in jail and then pleasure in people’s reaction. People look at your different when you mention something like that. They imagine you come from a family of delinquents, a family beset with felony. They wonder if those genes are imbedded deep in you, lying dormant, waiting for the right stimulus to show face. In short, they imagine I’m a thug. People often asked me why he was in jail. And I constantly lied. I had fun with it. When I was in a good mood I said he knifed someone. “Did they die?” they would mumble in horror. “Only a little,” I would say, “Only a little.” When I wasn’t in the mood I would say he jacked a priest. Or held up a small bank in Kilgoris. Or stole a baby. I got a bang from stuff like this. But such mischief grows old fast. Soon it didn’t matter. But what did he really do, I hear you asking? The judge said he facilitated the loss of a truckload of wheelchairs and crutches en-route to Rwanda. I’ve never asked him if he agreed with the judge.

Last week Farouk- together with a few thousand inmates – was released. Presidential pardon. Word got round very quickly and I found myself at the parking lot of Industrial Area Prison with my brother. It was headed to midday. My other cousin, Farouk’s older (and only) brother was also there holding court and looking a bit bewildered. The meeting party only consisted of the three of us. The rest couldn’t make it because it was kind of sudden; Kibaki didn’t send us emails. We chatted as we waited for him to come out. It was a beautiful day; it had rained the previous night so the ground was wet. The air, even the one in the jail compound, smelled of life. And the sun was out in a dress.

Farouk walks out a few minutes before midday. He walks hesitantly, like a man stripped of his dignity. He’s wearing blue bathroom sandals. He has on a cheesy and faded blue shirt with the middle button missing. He’s in oversized beige khaki pants, no belt, so he has one hand inside his pocket to prevent his pants from falling down. With his free hand he clutches, under his arm, a black paper bag. His world’s possession is in that bag. He’s been shaved clean, about a few millimeters from his skull. He hasn’t lost much weight; in fact he hasn’t changed much. He’s limping slightly. He stops and looks around then he spots us walking towards him. He slowly shuffles our way, clutching his little black paper bag, limping slightly, a faint smile playing at the corner of his lips, a smile that looked like an embarrassed smile from far but as he inched closer I realized that it was a smile trying to be brave. It seemed to say, “I told you guys I would be out before dinner.” I wasn’t convinced.

Cold soda

He hugs my brother fast. He hugs my brother the longest. They were closest. My brother visited him more than both of us combined. He knew when he was sick, or when he was down. They talked on phone frequently. He hugs me next. I have never a hugged a fellow man like that; hands all around torso and shit. It felt right. Then he hugs his brother last, a small awkward hug. They aren’t so close. I can’t tell you why, family stuff. Don’t act like you don’t have issues in your family.

My brother pats him on the back and says he looks good. “No you don’t, you look lousy.” I joke. He chuckles and says in his deep baritone voice, “Man, I was the most handsome man in this whole goddamned prison. This place will never be the same again with me gone.” I can’t resist so I remark, “Oh no doubt, I bet your toothless boyfriends you left back there would agree.”

Look, I was only trying to break the ice, I mean really I was only trying to make everybody relax, the air was too expectant. We were all trying to act prim and proper with our stupid velvet gloves and all. Thankfully he found it funny, like really found it hysterical. We all have a laugh and act like it’s just another day and we are all just shooting the breeze. Which is fine. After a few minutes my bro asks him, “What is the one thing you always wanted to eat or drink when you were released, we will get it right now. A cold beer or maybe some chicken? Vodka? Hey even some tail. What?”

He grins shyly, the sun shining off his scalp, he finally says, “A very cold Fanta.”

“Fanta? Really?” my brother echoes what perhaps we all thinking. He nods. We exchange brief glances. There is a Mobil or something up the road. Galitos and what not. My brother says sawa, let’s go, ride with me. He says he wants to walk there. I offer to walk with him. He hands his brother the little polythene bag and they get into their cars. I really wanted to find out what was in that bag; I wanted to know what a man leaves a jail with. Did he have a book in there? Did he have a change of underwear? Or did he carry hope in that bag? Or bitterness. Or angst. What does a man carry out of jail?

We walk out. At the gate he shows some paper to the security guy who glances at it briefly before handing it back without a word. Without a “good luck” or “take care” or “don’t come back.” Nothing. Civility doesn’t live in our jails. He limbs straight out of the gate without as much as a backward glance, holding up his pants so they wouldn’t fall down. Outside I remove my belt and hand it to him because him holding up his pants like that is depressing me. He belts up and we slowly walk up the road, jabbering. Or rather I ask him questions. He answers them nonchalantly, distractedly while looking at passing cars and at buildings. He looks surprised at being free, he seems to be getting his mind around freedom, disorientated by it all.

My cousin is not a bad guy. He’s just a guy who made some bad calls in his life. He grew up in Christian home. A family that stressed about respect and hard work. Not a bad chap, my cousin. He’s no riffraff either if you want to know. He went to school in the UK, came back with a degree in Civil Engineer but he never worked a day in his life because he’s a restless chap, because he’s the kind of guy who is in a goddamn big rush to get ahead of the queue. Because he loves the good life but unlike you and me, he wants it today. He wants it now. He always had a plan; come back home from the UK, get into the oil transportation business, work for three years driving a truck, buy his own, drive it for another two years, buy another one and start managing them from an office with a shingle bearing his name. He was ready to push the boat out. Only it didn’t turn out like that; he came back, started driving a truck, only it wasn’t an oil truck, drove it for a year and then ended up in jail the next year.

Clean slate

And now this is how it ends, with him walking by the roadside from jail in oversized khakis and a borrowed belt. This is how dreams die. But if you are those glass-half-full kind of people you would say this is how it starts.

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On a clean slate.

He orders a Fanta. A cold sweaty Fanta orange. He downs it in three gulps then orders another one. This one he sips slowly, thoughtfully even, like he’s trying to isolate the damned ingredients. This one he sips through a straw. We talk and chaff about, watching cars pull up to fuel. He asks about people, who had a kid, who got married, which club is happening now, stuff. He asks about our children. He asks about our women. But he never asks about our jobs. Never. I gather that’s because it will make him feel like a failure, it will make him feel how much he needs to work hard to catch up. He tells us about the politics of money in jail and how money will buy you protection, how money will buy you friends. How money will get you a bed in jail and soap and a good meal. The jail is the only place money can buy you sleep. He tells us about how you got to man up in jail and learn to fight your own battles, sometimes violently. He tells us how the reality of being sodomized comes close if you don’t have the right friends to buy, friends who stop being your friends when your money runs out. He talks about the nights that you feel hopeless and desperate. Nights that death seems like a friend.

He smiles a lot during our meeting. But the smile always refuses to reach his eyes. His eyes harbor something that I can’t put my fingers on, but they aren’t happy eyes. Although he sits there, upright in his seat, he exhibits a certain vulnerability. I could sense the fear in him. The fear and uncertainty of starting over. At some point his brother asks him what he wants to do and he says simply that he wants to go shags where his parents are retired and tell his mom he’s out. Only he says it in Luo. Please don’t bother having a jang translate this for you because it will be lost in translation. He says, “Adwaro dhi dala angis nyar’ Sakwa ni asewuok.” And it touches me, not so much what he says but why he says it.

He never called his mother, mommy or mum or anything like that. He always called her Nyar Sakwa. Sakwa is a place in Nyanza, his mom’s home. So he always called her Nyar Sakwa. Nyar means “daughter of”. Oh sod it; this is not a Luo class!

His mom – my aunt- is dead. Died years before he was sent off to jail. And so for him to refer to her in present tense was, I don’t know, real touching. I’m a sucker, I know.

The girls

He orders fries and chicken. And he cleans it off. I watch him eat; he eats fast, just like he likes to lead his life. He isn’t going into formal employment, that much we are sure of. It’s not for him. He’s not the type to sit around for four weeks waiting for a paycheck. Farouk is not into waiting around and perhaps that’s his Achilles heels. Perhaps what he needs in this new chapter of his life is to learn to wait things out; to take small steps, but even most important to appreciate those steps. Farouk is those chaps you are embarrassed at being broke. Terrified of it. But I will tell you here that he isn’t a gangster, I swear he isn’t. He doesn’t pull guns on people or break into homes. But he loves shady deals. He loves deals that bring in big spoils and the difference between him and us is that he is not averse to risk.

I don’t know if our jails are corrective. I don’t know if they instill a sense of reform or change of attitude. If they do then they failed with my cousin because sitting there listening to him, watching him eat I didn’t feel that he was a different guy, that prison had changed him. I was looking at the hedonistic chap who loved the fast life and who would pursue it with all his wit.

The girls who work at Industrial area offices start showing up for lunch. Girls in high heels and black stockings. Girls in fitting pants and short skirts. Girls in weaves and glowing skins. They pull over in their cars or stride in twos and threes. Laughing and strutting their thing, especially the ones who knew they got an ass.

Farouk stares. Boy, does Farouk stare at their asses! He loses all interest in what we are saying and his eyes follow any hot chick that walks in the shop. Hell, even the not so hot ones. “Things changed while you were gone; they all scrub up good now. All of them.” his brother tells him with a grin. He mumbles something incoherent. I swear I’m not making this up. He practically zones out, he stares at women like, well, a jailbird. But it was a relief for us in a way, that he still found women appealing, that he wasn’t batting (pun) for the other team.

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  1. I want more, feels like you stopped midway. Every family has drama and when Farouk talks of his mother, i teared up. I hope that he has changed, i really do. Great post as always.

  2. I guess I am allowed to express a preference, give me this kind of writing anyday. Those guest posts, people at parks, animals are coming in, etc are second place by a huge distance. Think of Bekele and then there are the others….

  3. reform must be anchored on programs that have been tested and the objectives measurable and attainable. It is a clear fact that the country’s prison system has made no apparent or secret effort at creating such workable programs, and the prison becomes a holding facility for the whims of the judiciary and the mercy of the president. In this sense, to expect a person to emerge from the gloomy confines of our prisons as reformed is metaphorical for the emergence of a bat from a cocoon, seeing as it is that a butterfly is the likeliest to come from the aforementioned cocoon; a prisoner will emerge same if not worse from these chambers of fear and torment.

  4. Starting over? Maybe not. It feels more like he will be continuing from where he left off, with a few handy lessons under his belt. I wish him well – he reminds me of my own favourite deviant cousin.

  5. Biko, jailbird is mostly used for persons jailed repeatedly. So in effect, you are sending him back to the slammer with your words. For the dark humour perhaps?

  6. looks like we are keen to wring you out completely… yeah.. “where is the rest of the post? black paperbag? ur belt?”

  7. He sounds like an intelligent but impatient man. If you ask me, i don’t think he will be going back. If anything, i think he will actually start over and overtake many… AND no i am not trying to make any one feel better. If your description of the whole situation is correct, that sounds like a man whose hustle is up but this time with a big lesson learnt.

  8. compressed and touching. i like your attention to details. going for the minute. reminds of whispers who could write a five steps distance in 800 words. cool men.

  9. Wow, that was a really good piece, i remember reading about when you went to visit him and am glad he’s out now. The part about going to see his mother to let her know he’s ok was particularly touching. I hope it all works out.

  10. What typos?? I was so with the story I dint see any… maybe if I read it the second time ….. brilliant Biko just brilliant 🙂

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  11. To help farouk biko,no.1,get him a wife,no.2, get him a job…in short he needs help may be counselling to help him properly fit in society by changing his attitude and perceptions to life otherwise he will be back in jail trust me.Things are tough out here bana,there is alot of fun in jail,look,free meals,free transportation,entertainment-they have tv,security(you cant be mugged/robbed),free clothing-they recently introduced some nice shoes,they are allowed to fleece the public via sms,they now access conjugal rights,chances of successfully transacting any illegal biz while in jail are very high than doin the same out here.In a nutshell there is alot of comfort and freedom in jail than out here…you can iddle,you’re given free training on technical jobs,out here all you see is ‘No iddling’,’No vacancy-hakuna kazi usiulize’. Its true our jails are not corretive lets give your cousin a week,and please remember to give us a post about how he gets back to jail,i suspect it will be an interesting read.

  12. Biko this was different….’really touching’ am touched. Hope life works out for him.

    BTW whatever happened to the script thing?

  13. I think most people r just looking at the jail part of it, but i think this is about MANHOOD. U inspired my thoughts today.
    thanx Biko.

  14. Excellent post. True to Biko style.

    I identify with Farouk. Sometimes life just isn’t moving fast enough. I sometimes feel like I could fast-forward to the time I own that black Range Rover Sport HSE and driving it around all over the place with no worries about the price of fuel or about the future at all.

    Then I wake up, ingia the Toyota IST and start wondering how I can make it consume even less!

    Shortcuts will more often than not land you in trouble.

    PS: I now have a renewed appreciation for my belt.

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  15. Biko, this is a poignant story and it helps to demystify the people behind bars. I was recently in an argument about conditions in prison and some of the guys thought life in the slammer ought to be as difficult as possible. The assumption is that people behind bars are all killers, rapists, maniacs and the epitome of violence. There are many Farouks behind bars, people who have ‘erred in their judgment’ and probably done something silly….

    I was waiting for an explosion from Farouk when you talked about “toothless boyfriends” as my first reaction was that that’s pretty insensitive of you, but obviously you know Farouk better…finally to some level I agree with Kimutai, about Bekele and the others…regards

  16. Biko this is too funny, it’s spot on just like your satmag piece which I still keep laughing about. Keep them coming!
    Trully “The stories we could tell with our eyes closed” 🙂

  17. really nice read….. hope there is a part two

    we need to find out was in that black paper bag

    and if fouky keeps up with wat he learnt in prison if he actually learnt anything of substance

  18. Biko, how many people have applied for a job as your Post Editor?

    And how much are you paying? 🙂

    Good post. It’s all been said.

  19. melancholy…..thats the first thing that came to my mind as i read this, yet i didnt even remember the meaning until i checked it out…..it brings out the sadness of the spirit but in a good way (your post, that is)

  20. Real touchy! Real sad..
    I had the ‘honor’ to visit the Industrial Area prison last Friday. My boy called me the previous night saying ‘I’m in more shit than you could possibly think’ .. He told me to check out the story in the dailies (He always likes making headlines). Now, my boy is not accused of small crimes like building an invisible skyscrapper with crutches n wheelchairs – Easy Farouk, I know you’re innocent. He is accused of an ingenous bank heist with a whole lot of zeros. A blueprint that has been replicated alot lately. (If in the end he is found guilty – God Forbid! – I’m selling that script to Hollywood). So he is a celeb in there! He is respected for the brains n I guess people want to be friendly just incase he really did it and is hiding a fortune under a rock. Starting over mkono mtupu is kinda tricky you know. I walk up to the Medium Security reception and say I would like to see ‘*first name*’ and the guard finishes the two other names. He’s smiling, he knows him too well. Everybody here does.
    After a short while I was allowed inside, I had to talk to him through a wiremesh, a thick glass with tiny holes in the centre and another wiremesh on his side. He is his usual self, tells me he his a legend in there. Guards sneak excuses to have a closer look at me (may I borrow the newspaper? you said you are a relative or friend?) – the free friend of a possible millionaire – running the offshore accounts. These guards don’t look like they buy bull, they seem to be sure he did it. Am sure he lets them thinks so, my boy has always been about image. He’s milking it dry … The prefect in there treats him with utmost respect. I’m sure they think he is Pablo Escobar or some shit like that. I’m sure he lets them think that. That attitude buys favours.
    I ask if he is ok and he says the only thing curtailed is his freedom. He says he’ll be out soon. He is worried about his assets outside, he wants me to go give someone some money and pick this or that asset. I tell him I don’t have that kind of money “You’re a good salesman go find it!” He responds. He’s particular worried about one asset, I have to pick it by Monday or its gone. He can’t live with that thought. His ‘friends’ are ripping him off coz he is in. I’m worried coz I don’t know where to get that kind of money in three days. I feel his pain.
    On Saturday I let him know someone might give me the money and that he should kneel down and pray for a good 30 minutes. My financier was sold to. I knew I would rescue him (a favour hard to forget incase there is a rock to be turned in future).
    Come Sunday afternoon, am cheering Gor at city stadium and I recieve his text ‘The fuck man, am in the coolers. Gor updates omera!’ .. I tell him the match just started, no goals yet and KCB can’t seem to find the ball. He laughs (or writes hahaha) and tells me to call him so he can hear the stadium environment. When I do, he answers says ‘Baaas, text me when we (Gor) score, I’m the commentator here’ Then he hangs up. I wouldn’t hang up if I was calling from jail! I text him ‘Do those fools know what a bigshot you are? The match is on DSTV, they can’t switch it on for you?’ He replies, ‘These people don’t have DSTV, they are quickly proccesing my release so I can donate it to them once out.’ I laugh then text him when Gor scores and when we’ve won the match.
    My financier calls later, when I alight in town from the stadium, saying she has to dissapoint me this time. She must have googled his name or read the papers! I knew I shouldn’t have let her off my sight until I had the cheddar!
    I call my boy and he doesn’t answer. He texts a shortwhile later saying that he had to pray first when he saw my call and that he is now ready for me.
    I break it down to him, it breaks him down. He wants to cry. I want to cry too. Then he says something strange, in luo ‘Kaka alemo malich ni, lemba ni odhi adhia nono’ I point out that God gives us what we need, not what we want. He tells me time is running out, ‘Please make a wise decision’. I say I’ll try and hang up.
    I met my boy in campus. And he is the kinda of guy who you can describe as ‘ana roho’. He always tells me that he has balls. And he defines having balls as ‘Having the guts to fart when you know you have diarrhoea!’. That killed me the first time I heard it. He’s always talking about deals. His phones never go silent and he is very secretive. His friends, even bestfriends like myself, are partitioned into compartments with a strict need-to-know basis kind of relationship.
    But, he is real fun to hang out with. He is the life of the party. A silly dancer! And he studied something to do with parks so he pretty much knows everywhere you can have an out of town kick ass shindig in this country. Our bond was written in blood when we knocked some fuckers teeth off in a rave bout in Kisumu. Oh, he went in for that too. Called me a pussy when he got out for 5 soc the next morning.
    I wish I could pay 5 soc to get him out! And scream ‘No more deals, dummy!’ in between his years.
    He says he only fears God and poverty.
    May God help him!

    Ps: Biko, am sorry for invading your space. All I wanted to say is I went to Industrial Area Prison and that it’s so painful to talk to someone you care about through a wiremesh-thick glass-wiremesh interface! But I just kept typing, I had to let out! I hope cops and lawyers don’t read your blog!

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    1. that was a really cool guest comment. am sorry about your pal and that diahrooea and balls remark was too epic.

    2. Thanks folks! My friend gets out today. He says he has enough stories to fill 14 blogs. I’ll give him Biko’s email

    3. Come on! You cannot type your whole story on someone else’s comment space. Surely! Blog-etiquette!! Get a blog or something if you must share your story

  21. Nice one. i won’t say more. I know of too close a jailbird to say more. Trouble is, they end up going back however much they resolve not too. Tell your cousin to take the slow lane this time round.

  22. Let’s hope Farouk will learn – possibly soon – to shun fast life and come back to reality. Otherwise his occupation will be inhabiting jail.

  23. i just love the way you write you can write about the old shoes outside my grandma’s hut in a way that will definitely keep anyone hooked, you are a great writer, am glad your cousin is out

  24. The bit about him asking for a fanta orange touched me…we really do take things for granted until we dont have them anymore.
    I enjoyed this piece Biko…amazing insight.

  25. ur blog post was as refreshing as a warm cup of black coffee.

    Et_al managed to add the cream 2 it.
    Beautiful.

  26. The sun was in a dress, hmmm I like that bit.
    Happy for your cousins release, means he must have been doing something right while in there. Its not like one gets onto that list by fluke. I am convinced he will not be going near prison walls ever again.

  27. I write. And I’m not anything in your league. I can tell you there is nothing like a story that comes from the heart. This is one of those. It made me cry. May Farouk find his destiny. Blessings.

  28. I was in a minimum security prison very recently. You know, some of those community CSR things you do just so that I can see what happens on the other side of the fence. Its amazing how much we take for granted. We were sharing one loaf between 4 of us, they were taking 4 bites per loaf. And the cold sweaty fanta……you never know what you’re in (or so some guy told me!)

  29. …made me look at ex-convicts in a different light. They are real human, prone to vulnerability, and they have a heart too! (and he says simply that he wants to go shags where his parents are retired and tell his mom he’s out. )

  30. That’s an amazing read!!!and yes Biko you do have a way with words, for me it was quite sad and tragic, i only managed to smile at every sense of humor, a smile that quickly faded away. I do wish farouk all the best, a little support and prayer from the family might turn things around…looking forward to part two-:)

  31. Good piece

    ‘He smiles a lot during our meeting. But the smile always refuses to reach his eyes. His eyes harbor something that I can’t put my fingers on, but they aren’t happy eyes’

    ……………….someone should try and find out what the eyes harbor….sigh

  32. Awesome as always 🙂
    Your comments too…:) …”Typos are a female dog” dunno why that tickled me so…

  33. “The rest couldn’t make it because it was kind of sudden; Kibaki didn’t send us emails.”

    There is a lot more of the “too busy it was sudden ” vibe where as friends and family we forget what a difference our presence could make during certain situations. A lot to learn from the post

  34. Et al sure lit a spark right there. So addicted. Great post Biko!

  35. Oh My God!! Et_al??!! Are we supposed to read allll that?! ngai!! Am curious though. Lakini ngoja kwanza niende lunch… 🙂

    1. @ Anon: The Shawshank redemption was not a stand alone novel. It was a short story: part of the different seasons short stories collection by Stephen King. So no. if Gachie has his books right, he wasn’t referring to Shawshank redemption.

      @ Biko this was an interesting read

  36. It seems to me that ones that the writer just bangs together in the morning are often the best. This one is no exception and it is full of gems like these two:

    The story begins at the end. What exactly does a man carry from jail?

    A great read.

  37. The Shank by Roderick Anscombe…its a really stunning novel about a guy named Dan. If you don’t trace it then i’ll lend you mine.

  38. You have this very interesting thing you do – you read a person’s face and get into their heads. It’s hard to tell which thoughts are theirs and which thoughts are yours, but it makes your stories personal. It gives them a whole new dimension and depth. You should do a novel if you haven’t already. I think your characters would be rivetting.

  39. And this is the reason why I love blogs….Iv read all your stories over and over probably know them by heart now….I wish Farouk all the best and keep writing.

  40. It always works out fine eventually mate.
    And you’re strong enough for any situations I can imagine you in.
    And unlike you, I have perhaps a more objective and clearer perspective of your ability to work out stuff.
    peace yo’

    1. Just about the kindest compliment you have paid me since I started blogging. The rest have been aimed at my jugular. I don’t know whether to be grateful or wary. But thanks mate.

  41. He’s changed. Not the same Farouk you went to visit that first time. I’ll pray for him. Ask him to guest blog about his experiences or narrate them to you so that you can write them. It would be interesting to read that.

  42. Et_al
    ur boy’s in there with me bro.I dont have to give his second name and his block at the reception,yep the guards know him only too well!!!!It breaks my heart everytime i go to see him,that is every saturday,mien the wiremesh,tiny holes and thick glass makes !!!!I jus pray that he never gets laid!!!damn it

  43. Jails do not really reform the inmates, I have a cousin who is in and out and he somehow seems to enjoy the experience

  44. I kept imagining wot the nyar_ sakwa part would sound considering he studied in the UK...this whole story reminds of a not so close heisty friend.. says:

    Preference safaris

  45. Biko, please don’t start your articles with “she’s called……”. Or “He’s called……”. You’ve fanyad this in two articles now.
    Try “Her name is…….”. Please. You are a great, phenomenal writer. Lakini you need an editor or an advanced writing class!
    Also, there’s a story where you were writing about your friend and how his life changed 360 degrees? What? Should have been 180 degrees.
    Watch for the small things.

  46. Biko its never too late to comment.Our jails are never corrective, here jailbirds make more money than most CEOs.
    They afford to befriend female wardens and even sire kids and pay school fees.