Letter From An 18-year Old Girl

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Have you ever received an email that starts with “Hae, Jackson” and you suddenly feel like your stomach is going to run? I was told those are the famous Millennials. They are a unique group of sub-humans who came after the ones who came after us – the Y-generation. They dress weird and talk weird and have the concentration spans of bees and are creative and adaptive and  spend their whole lives with earphones stuck in their ears.

The Millennials are sometimes so busy that they are least bothered by commas and sentences that start with capital letters. Full stops are too dull for some of them. Why bother with full stops when you can just start the next sentence without any preamble?

So when I received an email from a 18-year old who started her email with, “Hi, Biko,” I thought it was a miracle. But then again this girl was writing from Precious Blood, Riruta, a fourth former with a crisp adult mind.

She wrote:

This morning, I read your ON THE BRINK OF FORTY article on Man Talk before I went for the compulsory mass. I’m in high school and so we get newspapers kinda late – when someone goes to get it from the library. I had been sad because I felt inadequate and because I felt alone. And your piece heightened some of that. Not because I am on the brink of forty, No, I’m 18 actually.

She continued:

At 18, I am not sure who my friends are because life has not thrown me much curveballs. But I have a good laugh with everybody so it saves me the need to actually have friends friends. Like you mention in that article, being 18 is also like connecting flights in a foreign country – I’m in a temporary transit zone in which I have to sit shortly before I proceed to the world which excites and scares me.

She then went on a paragraph of stuff that are neither here nor there, then came this part:

When I was 8, I used to write Primary as ‘Prymary’. One day when I was sending dad for books, I wrote on the list, “Prymary Maths, Prymary  English, Prymary Science….” And He made me write the word correctly ten times and then rewrite the whole list.

And I Never misspelt that word again. Maybe you should try that with your baby girl about ‘sootcase’. And for the boys who will get close to her before she is ready, please get a gun. But she’ll not like that either.

Talking of primary, how come Kuyus pronounce “primary” as “preemary?” Ati, “I went to Kutus Municipality Preemary school.”  If I hear one more “preemary” from someone I swear I will sign up for adult education. It’s “Primary! But who am I to make fun of guys from Kutus when I can’t even pronounce “hospital” for crying out loud! I say, “Hostal.” For the life of me, I can’t seem to get the “p” from hospital. The “P” is silent, I guess.

Anyway, she continued:

About your departed mommy, and may her soul rest in Perfect Peace. You know when these people who love us tell us we mean the world to them? I’m getting ahead of myself so let me go for prep. I am in form four by the way…. I have an English Paper tomorrow. Wish me luck!

So I wished her luck. She sounded like a loner. Someone who lived in their heads. She reminded me of my lovely niece ( Hey, Candy Jane, call me!) who also happens to have attended PB, finishing last year. Super smart but strange girl who keeps to herself mostly, says very little, reads tons of books, plays her violin and has the soul of an adult. I always wondered what goes in the head of these people.

I loved how this girl wrote; no typos (something I should learn from her!), or grammatical errors, hell, she even used parentheses in her sentences.

So I asked her to describe to me what being 18 felt like: What her fears are. What does she struggle with and dream of? I asked her to write this because I was curious to know if 18 changed from what it used to be in the 90’s – at least the little I remember of it. “Sit down and just write anything that comes to your head, in whatever format,” I emailed her.

She disappeared for two weeks and just when I thought she had been caught emailing and locked up in a dungeon, I received her story. She asked me not to use her real name but instead use “Stale Bread” as her pseudonym. (These kids are strange, ey?) She asked me, “would you mind if I sent you my thoughts on things that I can’t share with people my age? I don’t trust diaries. They get caught.”

Hehe. I liked that. Diaries, they get caught. But what if I got caught, I wondered? What if these people who “catch” diaries came for me and strapped me to a chair in an abandoned warehouse in Ruiru and passed electric current through my poor nipples and shouted in my ears all night; TELL US WHAT STALE BREAD WROTE TO YOU! WHAT IS YOUR EMAIL PASSWORD? WE WON’T STOP UNTIL WE BREAK YOU, BIKO!

What if, Stale Bread?

Anyway, I’m running this letter from this girl because she has clarity of thought. It’s that simple, really.

*

By Stale Bread

He has not spoken to me the whole year yet we made out the last time we were together. It can’t have been bad because we were cool then. Maybe it was something else I did. I had been smitten then, now I’m sad and angry. Sad because he’s stayed away too long and angry because he is in my mind too often.

I feel like the future holds happy stuff. A much needed gush of fresh air. But I worry that I may not be able to do everything I would want to do –maybe because I’ll lose focus or lack opportunity or maybe I’ll just chicken out. And when I worry, a dark cloud of gloom comes upon me, and after a while, it passes. Just like a wave of nausea.

I have learnt that not everything works out. All thanks to David Nicholls and his book ‘One Day’ -which is beautiful by the way- and life, which has shown me this firsthand. I’ve also learnt that nothing is ‘very important’. The things that we deem very important (Including your children) screw us over in one way or the other and ditch us –leaving us bare. Bare because, for them, we killed most or all other aspects of our life.

The society’s expectations of me suck. Society expects that on the eve of my eighteenth birthday I’ll sleep and when I wake up the next day, I will be a grown, mature woman. I was telling my friend Sandy the other day that to mature is a choice. She laughed. Surely the physical aspect of maturity is uncontrollable but the mental and emotional aspect is a choice. So, dear society, shove it. Furthermore, so long as I have the word ‘teen’ in my age, I’m still trouble.

Preferences are realized. Some of them not ‘usual’. Take for example the males. Some of my friends like them younger. However, they don’t want this said out loud because it’s embarrassing and it will also get them judged. Some like them old though, the refine that age accords the older males appeals to them. It’s a bonus if they’re fun and dangerous.

The appreciative glances and the envious glances I elicit from the males and the females (I am very tempted to say “respectively”). A triumph. Those appreciative glances you like but cannot relish at fourteen because your mother is around somewhere. The ones you almost stop getting when you get to that age they term as ‘respectable’. So I bask in this age of now and catch me some of its sun –hoping the sun won’t age me prematurely like the internet says.

The mirror goads me. “Your forehead is too out there.” –It says- and “your acne will never end, at least until you’re thirty years old!” also “Look! Your legs are darker than the rest of your body. Your knees, they’re fifty shades darker!”  I leave that critic called the mirror and turn the radio up a little. The song that’s playing tells me to accept. Accept and move on. I ignore this advice though. I turn to my high school principles – the one about the 3As. Acknowledge, Accept, Act. But since I’m past the first two, I move on to stage 3. Action. I play some real loud hyped up music and start working out. When I get tired, I call my mom.

“Mom, get me acne cream and a tub of body scrub. Yes. Just buy I’ll explain later”

But I know -like all the other things I’ve tried- it won’t work. Futility.

Don’t make fun of my somatic flaws though. Or at night, when I’m tired of texting, I’ll research on the amount of money I’ll need to get them plastically corrected and since I won’t be able to afford it, I’ll dream about it. And maybe one day I’ll make my dreams come true. You don’t want that. Do you?

I can’t throw a tantrum and tell the people that hold me dear that they don’t love me –like I would have as a clueless child. Now I know who loves me –and who doesn’t. Not with men though –troublesome creatures those ones- I prefer not to know.

But I know Franklin loves me. And so does Evans. Irrevocably. This is irrefutable- I have proof. I also know my parents love me too. I have proof –they brought Evans and Franklin forth. No I’m just kidding. Though Franklin is part of the reason, they do a lot for me and they are here. The other things they do for me I don’t care to say, because you’ll think, “they’re supposed to do that” and that’s taking my parents for granted. Yet they’re awesome.

Frankly though, I feel old. Eighteen is a ton of numbers! But not to your big brother’s longtime friend –the one you’ve always had a crush on- because every time he sees you –he doesn’t hear symphonies in his head. No- he exclaims, “Si you’re Steve’s small sister? You’ve grown up so fast! I remember when you were small….”

And you stop listening because in your head you’re thinking, “No handsome, my name is not ‘Steve’s small sister’ it’s Karen.”

Eighteen is also not a ton of numbers to your parents. You’re still a child to them. You still can’t do the things you couldn’t do when you were seventeen. But I’m legal, an adult. I’ll go apply for my ID now. But I’ve got to do my hair first and look flawless for the ID photo. At the salon, I’ll think of who to vote for in 2017.

*

P.S: The final Writing Masterclass is here from 2nd to 4th December. Next month, actually. We have only 15 slots left so far, so kindly send an email to [email protected] to reserve a slot.

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    1. It’s unbelievable how she’s getting vivid,infact her story tells…
      Oh yeah! I think still water runs deep
      That’s deep Stale

  1. Stale bread writes well, very mature for an 18-year-old. I hope her friend Sandy is also a pseudo.

    http://www.treatsonabudget.co.ke/

  2. this why my primary teacher used to tell us while in class 8…’boys, your wives are in class 1…these girls are not yours’…and she was right…an 18 yr old cannot handle this girl

  3. Awwwww…”Now I know who loves me –and who doesn’t. Not with men though –troublesome creatures those ones- I prefer not to know.” Ten years later I hope you’ll know better than I

  4. “I was telling my friend Sandy the other day that to mature is a choice. She laughed. Surely the physical aspect of maturity is uncontrollable but the mental and emotional aspect is a choice. ”
    Stale bread, I like you.

  5. I don’t miss being 18. It’s like being free while being chained. A paradox.
    I do miss however, the feeling of immortality and timelessness. When nothing could touch you, let alone hurt you.

  6. I love this girl! Reminds me so much of myself as a teenager when everything was confusing and the only sane place on earth was in my head….and yes that P.B chapel was one of my favourite spots in high school.

  7. Sigh. To be 18 again. She reminds me of that time in life before it got complicated. In the words of Any Mineo, idealism is the language of the young. She’s an old soul.

  8. Stale bread. Ace those exams and come have a bench on this platform. Biko, you’ll give her a slot, I guess? She writes pretty well

  9. This is a lovely piece. The one guest writer that has her own voice. She just sounds like herself, not mimicking anyone. J’adore.

  10. So, Biko, Has it changed? Being 18 now and what you remember of the 90s?

    I don’t know if any human being will ever live without insecurities, is it possible? However, I think we outgrow how much we attach our worth to those things we deem our flaws. I am not my skin. I know it is hard to see oneslef in all our cracked perfection but we can.

  11. BBiko, no way your lovely nephew went to PB (your niece perhaps?). I’ll let it go, if you can live with our ‘preemary’.

      1. I have amended it. I will also write a two page apology for that mishap. I am sorry. Please forgive me. It will not happen again. Ever.

  12. Whooooooooosh! Best article I’ve read in a long while! She sounds like me when I was 18 (minus the stares of admiration). Keep her Biko… it would be nice to watch this one grow into her 20s and one day write articles for New York Times and books! O the books! A gem!

    ION Shout out to PB Riruta Alumni!

  13. I’m hooked. Great penmanship from the lovely young lady. Reminds me of me at that age once upon a time. Wish I had stuck to my guns and followed my passion for writing. Kudos to stale bread

  14. Stale bread is such a gem. Big ups to her very good writing. Reminds me of myself at 18…that guy I lost touch with and hoped he’d look for me but no phones no letters! Shida. Well done girl. You got a talent there! And don’t worry..the years will refine you to be an amazing awesome woman.
    Ps. Biko my emails are bouncing back. please check on that and reserve for me a slot. Thanks.

  15. At 18 , I wish I was still in school . I think its much harder When you are already out of school , naive and clueless .Sometimes the acne goes quite early, i am a leaving proof ( ….goes to the mirror)

  16. Been challenged by a stream of kids that feature on this blog. Name Joe Black, the kid who swaps calls and now this Stale bread yungun!! . Fresh piece this was. *Have my standing ovation Miss.*

    www.lusekacafe.com

  17. Preferences are realized. Some of them not ‘usual’. Take for example the males. Some of my friends like them younger. However, they don’t want this
    said out loud because it’s embarrassing and it will also get them judged.

    wow where do you find such talented writers my oh my can she write

  18. This part had me dying ” strapped me to a chair in an abandoned warehouse in Ruiru and passed electric current through my poor nipples and shouted in my ears all night; TELL US WHAT STALE BREAD WROTE TO YOU! WHAT IS YOUR EMAIL PASSWORD? WE WON’T STOP UNTIL WE BREAK YOU, BIKO” 🙂 🙂 Stale Bread is proof that you cannot roll with a chick of the same age…she needs a 26 and above man to handle her.

    1. Using Pythagoras theorem,explain how you came up with the age of 26 and above….Why not 25.6yrs or 27 yrs or are you trying to sell yourself? 🙂

      1. Oh my ! Great piece Stale Bread,Mould that girl Biko,I already see a wonderful writer in her..
        We sail in the same boat girl,mind you I blew my 20th candle the other day.
        18 is not far from 20 ,isn’t it ?

    2. But why does she have to be “handled”? Maybe women aren’t made to be tamed. Besides, like she said maturity is a choice (for both women and men) 🙂

  19. she writes realy well she’s an exceptional from from some other 18yr olds who when they txt or send anything that involves writting u cant get a thing man..

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  21. Being 18 is beautiful only because you are responsible for yourself (and not really). But growing older certainly puts things into perspective. I’ve always been introverted but I realized that afew good friends are better than being the life of the party. The insecurities we often harbor are usually our own creation. So Stale Bread, worry not about the trivial things, the acne will clear in time and it won’t matter anyway with a brain like that!

  22. Well done, Stale Bread!

    At 31 years, I can safely say that men are still troublesome creatures. You just wise up to their game because they share the same script, only that they think they are the first to try their lines on you. haha

  23. she writes so well. after my fourth form i also turned 18..and had a major heartbreak..which made me an adult instantly…and i had a diary…i hope no one caught it 😉

  24. Lemme preserve my comments on the piece since you told her to right whatever comes in her mind in whatever format. And she did exactly that! Otherwise I stagnate unmoved!
    About the Master class, this is the best thing that happened to me in 2015, I was there last class and it was Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome!
    Grab your card, rush to the ATM, then to nearest Mpesa and book your place.
    If you ever regret it, come for my head!

    1. … and they taught you how to write, write as “right”? and …(worrathose?) “Otherwise I stagnate unmoved!” ? smh…

    2. You attended a Master class and still can’t tell “right” from “write”…?? Biko, some of your graduates are coming out half baked.. 🙂

    3. EDITED VERSION:
      Let me reserve my comments on the piece, since you told her to write whatever comes to mind, in whatever format. And she did exactly that! (Otherwise I stagnate unmoved!) <— I can't salvage this one :D.
      About the Master class, this is the best thing that happened to me in 2015, I was there last class and it was awesome! Awesome! Awesome!
      Grab your card, rush to the ATM, then to nearest Mpesa and book your place.
      If you ever regret it, come for my head!

  25. Indeed, Karen does have clarity of thought. That’s blooming talent right there. She should enrol for the Masterclass next year.

    PS. I hope there’s one because I really wanna hop on board, but the next one’s timing is quite unfavourable for me.

  26. Aha Stale Bread is Karen aka Steve’s small sister which she doesn’t quite like! She has quite a good turn of phrase, that I will give her.

  27. “The appreciative glances and the envious glances I elicit from the males and the females (I am very tempted to say “respectively”).” Hahaha trust me, she is a wild one. Had 2 or 3 introverts in my life and the stuff they got upto in bed was quite scary to say the least. Stale bread has some dark imagination I can sense it. Or maybe I’m just a perv.

  28. Well written.Young girl got a thing for good
    writing. Let her write more Biko.oh and I went to
    mathaithi piilimary ..thats how its pronounced
    Biko.

  29. The society’s expectations of me suck. Society expects that on the eve of my eighteenth birthday I’ll sleep and when I wake up the next day, I will be a grown, mature woman. I was telling my friend Sandy the other day that to mature is a choice. She laughed. Surely the physical aspect of maturity is uncontrollable but the mental and emotional aspect is a choice. So, dear society, shove it. Furthermore, so long as I have the word ‘teen’ in my age, I’m still trouble.
    I like this girl.

  30. I know for a fact I was not writing like this at 18, and there are many others who do not write like this now.

    Also, Luos say Hosiptal (but then again you South Nyanza people speak weird, thus your Hostal). We always misplace the ‘i’ in our speech. The same way we say Narobi and Naikuru. http://www.magunga.com/omera-this-is-narobi/

  31. Steve’s Small sister….kudos!!! i just love her writing, the flow of it creates sweetness. I identify with her and her issues. Chocolate man, kindly keep her.

  32. Other than the relish that elicits rumbling of an empty stomach after the mention of such cuisines, i must also add that the read culminates to a prose so fine you cant help but savour… Great!

  33. @stale bread….no such thing as a cute ID oicture .I changed mine.finally when the new generation ID came out and I swear its worse.sigh!
    I literally can’t remember myself at 18.I’ve really tried and I can’t.but am glad for ageing.its directly proportional with not giving a crap..

  34. She writes so well, her thought process, RAW and with brutal honesty. She needs hare own column. Also can you do something about Njoki Chege while you are at it?

  35. Great piece stale bread!you feel alone and lost,but you have a voice,and therein lies your greatest weapon to finding yourself.But don’t be in a hurry!growing up sucks

  36. Well written piece. Good luck in your exams. Busherian here. We guys of that part of town have to stick together. Route 102.

  37. well written and we appreciate the existence of 18 year olds of this kind…i am disturbed you loathe diaries, thing is i have 4 generously paged note books for my journals (for the past two years now). i find solace in writing down whatever disturbs me. i am not introverted though, am a psanguin.

  38. She’s brilliant! She’s a deep thinker, introverted and reads a lot. I can identify with her because when I was at the same age, I could never connect/communicate with my age group (you guessed it, I am an introvert and books were my escape)

  39. Someone somewhere keeps feeding us the bollocks that Kenyans don’t read. This girl writes this way and many more guest writers on this blog because Kenyans do read. Period. Awesome stuff, Stale Bread.

  40. I always wished I had a big brother when I was that age. Then I could brag about how protective he is and also have his friend to crush on like everybody else. Oh well…
    Of stale bread. I like her. She’s interesting..

  41. Nothing stale about this bread. Her intro sure got me (He has not spoken to me the whole year yet we made out the last time we were together…) I love her style and the life lessons (already), and the absence of typos will make me check my stuff again and again, so I can quit firing autocorrect for the nth time! This is one guest writer I totally did not mind reading to the end. Girl, may the future hold lots of happy stuff for you. Thanks, Biko for bringing this beautiful soul to the gang. Love your intro too, you gotta love those sub-humans!

  42. …that to mature is a choice. She laughed. Surely the physical aspect of maturity is uncontrollable but the mental and emotional aspect is a choice…Get in, Stale Bread!

  43. I wish people could get mentor when they reach the age “18” bcoz seemingly it’s the age where most of us battling to understand and wanting to know at the same time.i remember myself,i use to write about everything that lends on my mind.it was just a long story and I called it a monogram.

  44. I remember writing some of those exact words in my highschool journal. Stale Bread…your like my little soul sister. Well, am 22 now, you’d be surprised at the kind of things this world will teach you. Pain will come with unbelievable ecstacy and you will learn to handle them both with equal grace. And you will find peace in the oddest of places. Great read.

  45. Biko, you have to keep this one.Let her come back often. The gang has accepted her.For an 18yr old…she’s great.Reminds me of my old self when I used to write. Maybe I should go back to it.

  46. Hae Biko ‘Karen’ is good! Loved reading her piece. Itsso real adolescent experience we all go through only this time she has a talent to put it on paper. And your usual lovely style of transitioning stories….

  47. Love this girl! *the appreciative and envious glances I elicit from men and women* (and I am tempted to say respectively)….. 18 is surely a ton of numbers!

  48. Biko – your niece is called Candy Jane … really?? In the words of Chris Rock, your job as her uncle will be to keep her off the pole.

  49. Biko, in your master class , please don’t train them to write like you. Rather, let them find their own writer’s voice, please. Too many guest writers trying to write the way you do and its just not working.

  50. i love Stale Bread..no, not stale bread, she reminds me of myself. At 18 i was at the brink of insanity and thinking of where i could buy an AK47 to blast myself but wrote poetry instead and it kept me sane….she will be our own Chimamanda Adichie someday, tell her i said so.

  51. I totally loved this one Biko…nurture this talent. It is worth a lot.Reminds me so much of myself when I was 18.Great read.

  52. This girl reminds me of me when I was eighteen. Such an introvert, self esteem issues, deep and complicated thoughts about life, and wondering what it all means and what is life? I took a different path though, i used diaries, and no they didn’t get caught. If there was a Biko when i was 18 maybe I would have expressed myself publicly too. Piece of advice to stale bread, it gets better, you learn who you are and get comfortable in your skin, you discover make up and hopefully how to use it correctly so that it works for you and not make you look like a Halloween costume, then the boys start to notice you and they now, are too many to handle and its exciting at first but becomes tedious, yes they are a special breed. All in all it works out in the end!

  53. Mi niko 18 tooo… & 4 sure l cannot bring to the table such a good piece….she is goooood…rili good ….when l finali grow up l want to be like her..hahaha na ati niko 18

  54. Si you’re Steve’s small sister? You’ve grown up so fast! I remember when you were small….”…Best part and soo true.

  55. Lol.I always look forward to the comments,the gang is a huge bus full of all characters!lol
    Anyway…at 18 I had just done 1st year in Campus and was experimenting with Smirnoff black ice at Sherlocks-Nakumatt lifestyle.That was after planning a pizza date at Debonairs with my former schoolmates.Those were the days..fast track this to few years later….Bills,Bills,Bills and work that leaves you with no time for yourself with folks who keep telling you how you need to stop showing up for Sunday brunches alone-implying..u need to get married..Time flies….

  56. Stale bread is an awesome writer.
    Her mastery and english diction is really on point!! You choose to be mature; very true statement, unfortunately people fear the level of maturity in you, especially ladies because age catches up with us guys still making imperceptible, insentient jokes!! Guess it’s why most young people with an “adult soul” are loners.

  57. Hi this comment is totally unrelated to the 18year old post above. I just want to rant and say it’s unfair for people to post photos of others without readers consent. Biko, are you a bald bespectacled guy with a neat goatee? No need to add chocolate to the color of your complexion. If the description fits, go ahead deny it. Tell me a lie. Ever since I came across the something in Jadudi’s head story, I have gone back and read ( retread some) your posts. I’m afraid to finish them. I’ going backwards. Nimefika that animal in Tsavo called Moskito. (I didn’t see that one coming).
    I was happy with the image I had of you in my head (not at all flattering) but all was well with my soul. I swore I would not google images of Jackson Biko and there are times that curiosity nearly got the best of me butSatan is a liar, I overcame and resisted. And then boom out of nowhere I’m reading about your plastic money woes and this story leads with a photo. I’m soooooo disappointed.. Damn you are hot. I could not even make out the famous forehead. You look like those dudes who say twira and ana one (eti another one). Majamaa wa kujidu. Kama we we si Babi, you’ll know what that means. If not ask your agemates who grew up in Eastlands. But I’m glad looks are deceiving na you are a down to earth guy.
    I am a keen reader of Elizabeth George Inspector Lynley’s mysteries and I refuse to watch the TV Shows lest my characters are not cast according to the way I picture them. I prefer books to movies and most often than not the actors who are cast don’t live up to the book.
    That Biko, if that was you and my Biko need to be aligned. Hao mapaparazzi washindwe. I so liked and agreed with every sentiment in your Camera & Green Dress post. Na kwa hayo machache

  58. Im i allowed to start an uprising?

    We want Stale Bread!We want Stale Bread!We want Stale Bread!We want Stale Bread! 😀 😀 😀

  59. I love love this article…… simply amazing and what a relief to know that there are eighteen year olds who do not write xaxa ….lol ….. xema etc…

  60. Stale bread reminds me of this teen who has a major crush on me. She just can’t get over it. She has openly admited it. I have seen her grow teeth to teeth. Am a little older than her, though we swam together naked back in the days in a river at the village. She is all grown now, she looks very pure and innocent. Her brothers are my closest friends. Whenever I tell her that we can’t have a relationship. She throws tantrums, she wants to hear non of it She says she is all grown and she can handle any outcome. I can’t visit his brothers at their home anymore. For me she is still the little girl I used to Know. Teens amaze me.

  61. I can relate with stale bread. Being an introvert is really hard. I litterally have to carry around a notebook for jotting down my thoughts then burn them as soon as I remember. As she said “diaries get caught”

  62. I jumped to read this because she’s 18. (I’m 19) And I always thought I was good till I read your work, Karen. That’s your name, right? (And I stopped reading because in my head I’m thinking, ‘No crowd, her name is not ‘stale bread’, it’s Karen’)
    Nice read. Best piece yet. That’s why today I shy away from writing the usual, “Check out my blog, https://danixkamau.wordpress.com/. Feel free to share your thoughts”
    And who said we can’t handle girls our own age? 18s and 19s…. Try me pretty.
    Anyway, great piece.

  63. That opening line though… I’ve opened this post many many times just to read “Hae, Jackson” then laugh my head off!
    To Miss Stale Bread, kudos! And thank you for representing PB Very Well. Keep writing, we’ll keep reading!

  64. This is the epitome of a one in a million girl. Love her train of thought, writing and who she is. Looking forward to more of her writing, Biko – Pleeeaaaase? 🙂

  65. Damn! I’m twenty, but reading this stuff makes 18 feel like decades ago.

    Lots can change in two years people, give her time. Hopefully she’ll have gotten plenty of curveballs by then to start shaping her life and push that emotional quotient even high up.

    Kudos luv. Your life begins now. Enjoy the hell out of it.

    P.S.: If you do nothing dumb when you’re young, you’ll have nothing to remember when you’re old

  66. Biko,the way u introduce new writers here makes us want 2 read the pieces.if you used the same method to sell shoes,you would comfortably sell me gumboots on a sunny day to attend a wedding

  67. Hahaha! As an Ex-PBarian, I totally understand the ‘Stale Bread’ moniker. If you were in PB, you would too. Down memory lane.

  68. I turned 25 the other day and it’s uncanny to me how perfectly I relate to this piece. You’d think it gets better with age. That you have more clarity. That you become wiser. Like you suddenly wake up one morning and your life is all what you want it to be. 25! A quarter of a century! And what do I have to show for it? Nothing. And believe me when I say this Stale Bread, 25 is a ton of numbers for me!

  69. Stale bread.At 18,you’re worried about so much.Some worries genuine,others totally silly.But then our bigger buddies tell us it’s just the norm.
    This girl writes.